My daughter's first one

[artist]

What do you think?

http://www.neuro-physio.co.uk/yourcondition.html

She is Lynda in the side column. She's got CIDP (see Guillian Barre).

[Thos]

I read it with interest. I must confess that I knew nothing at all of the condition and it humbles me to become aware of the numbers of sufferers of various conditions of which we know nothing or very little.

Thos.

[Irene]

What a tragic and difficult condition to deal with!

I did a Google to read more about it. Although the onset is swift, according to the webpage I found, there appeared to be recovery eventually. Was my understanding of the situation correct, artist? No doubt you have researched and Googled 'ad nausium'.

I sincerely hope that Lynda shows signs of recovery soon. :) , In the meatime, you know that you have the support of all of us here in the forum.

P.S. Almost forgot to mention... The website looks good. Hopefully it will give others with similar dificulties a place to focus upon.

[deuces wild]

What a tragic and difficult condition to deal with!

I sincerely hope that Lynda shows signs of recovery soon. :) , In the meatime, you know that you have the support of all of us here in the forum.

Ditto!

[artist]

P.S. Almost forgot to mention... The website looks good. Hopefully it will give others with similar dificulties a place to focus upon.

This was the only feedback...............Thanks Irene.

This is the first website Lynda has made - with no guidance - I had hoped the 'more knowledgable' would have said something - be it damning or just OK. She asked me to see what sort of feedback it got. How will she go forward if what she's trying to do is failing in some way..........

[-pops-]

Overall it looks good. Perhaps a change of font in the main text (the side column is fine as it is) into something a bit more interesting (I don't know which one at the moment, it's something to experiment with).

Under the "Other conditions I treat include:" header, the first one has unnecessary spacing. Remove the justifying for those two lines.

Also, under the same header, the "contact me" ought to show how to contact i.e. include the phone number and email address there rather than as a tiny footer.

As the clinic has a domain name, doesn't it also have its own email address? I always think a hotmail address looks a bit naff on a professional website.

[artist]

Overall it looks good. Perhaps a change of font in the main text (the side column is fine as it is) into something a bit more interesting (I don't know which one at the moment, it's something to experiment with).

Under the "Other conditions I treat include:" header, the first one has unnecessary spacing. Remove the justifying for those two lines.

Also, under the same header, the "contact me" ought to show how to contact i.e. include the phone number and email address there rather than as a tiny footer.

As the clinic has a domain name, doesn't it also have its own email address? I always think a hotmail address looks a bit naff on a professional website.

Thanks - I'll pass this on to her.

[andsome]

I sincerely hope that all goes well.

[artist]

I sincerely hope that all goes well.

This is not actually my daughter's site - just her first go at making one. It's for her physiotherapist - who she has had to pay for privately. The illness opened our eyes as to what the NHS actually provided - or not - in the way of support. God knows what people do if they haven't got the means to pay for their own help!